I'm giving this a 3.5 star review because I can tell a lot of effort was put into this, and I know what a pain it is to use actionscript. However, posting your panels here should only be done for hosting purposes; NG is a place for full releases of original content. If you end up finishing the adventure and posting the comic per-act as a compiled movie, then maybe it would be presentable. The jokes are ok, pretty funny here and there. Try hosting your comic on ComicFury, they allow Flash uploads. It's well-made, but it's unfinished and unless people have read your comic prior to this they won't know what's going on. Keep up the good work, I'd like to see this finished.